Review Detail of DaoistuEtpEO in A Unique Yautja (DC Fanfic)
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This is a great story. For future references perhaps you can make a couple more yautjas have a little more human features as the main characters romance that I’ve seen in your tags. But don’t make the added yautjas a reincarnated person. Please don’t make the story be generic as the MC is having relationships on earth and them wanting to be connected to the characters. Perhaps you can make the main character have more yautja personality with with a little of his previous personality but make him a little more ruthless. Maybe you can make the main character have a more leadership role for his race in the near future.
A Unique Yautja (DC Fanfic)
Blooded_Yautja
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First off, let me thank you for the review. Second, I'm steering well clear of having the MC take any leadership roles. I want the story, for the most part, to be about him hunting, fighting and growing as a character. Politics and kingdom building would just bog that down. Maybe in a later arc, sure, but not for a long time. Third, there will be no other reincarnated people in this story. It always bugged me when I read about it in other fanfics or stories because it takes away from the MC being unique and kinda stops them from feeling 'special' in the way all protagonists should feel. Fourth, I'll try my best to make him a proper Yautja with a dash of human thrown in, so please don't worry about that. If I do stray from it too far, feel free to tell me! :)
Blooded_Yautja:First off, let me thank you for the review. Second, I'm steering well clear of having the MC take any leadership roles. I want the story, for the most part, to be about him hunting, fighting and growing as a character. Politics and kingdom building would just bog that down. Maybe in a later arc, sure, but not for a long time. Third, there will be no other reincarnated people in this story. It always bugged me when I read about it in other fanfics or stories because it takes away from the MC being unique and kinda stops them from feeling 'special' in the way all protagonists should feel. Fourth, I'll try my best to make him a proper Yautja with a dash of human thrown in, so please don't worry about that. If I do stray from it too far, feel free to tell me! :)