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SpideyNova
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So far it's absolutely fantastic 😊😊 and I can't wait for more chapters ................................................................................

Please Move Along

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Yeah your right. I really want continue the story too, but currently it's really hard for me to think and develop the plot forward. Though after giving Anu all those skills I was not planning for him to gain more and just explore what he can do with what he currently has. I tried a lot of ideas before writing this one and publishing it, but I am almost every time stuck at the 9th or 10th chapter of every novel i write😓! I think I'll discontinue this story for now and after some time I'll come back to it. In the mean time of I get some other idea for a new story and publish it, I hope you will be there to support me. Thank you, for supporting Second World Idle Life!

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Thank you for the support SpideyNova!! Honestly I was starting to lose interest in writing the story, but with someone appreciating and looking forward to the chapters, it really motivates me to continue!!

SpideyNova
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While it makes me sad to say this but if the story really doesn't interest you anymore then it's probably best to not continue writing it till you have an interest in the story. The reason I say that is because usually when an author tries to continue a story their interested in they usually make the story take a bad turn. However if you do plan to continue the story anyway (which I honestly hope you do) then something that crossed my mind is that in my personal opinion I love over-powered main character type stories which this story seems to follow, sorry so my opinion was that the direction you already had the story going was awesome though my problem was that I was hoping that this story doesn't follow the path of him constantly getting powers and abilities that doesn't suit the MC's path(or style i guess it could be called). Umm so what ig I'm trying to say is that I hope the story doesn't focus on him getting awesome powers that have nothing to do with him being a Sky Dragon God but also that the mc doesn't become so overpowered that he's basically one-hit killing all his enemies.

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Umm so basically all that shortened I hope that if you continue the story I hope that it doesn't focus on the mc getting overpowered abilities that have nothing to do with the mc or the MC's style ig it could be called.

SpideyNova:While it makes me sad to say this but if the story really doesn't interest you anymore then it's probably best to not continue writing it till you have an interest in the story. The reason I say that is because usually when an author tries to continue a story their interested in they usually make the story take a bad turn. However if you do plan to continue the story anyway (which I honestly hope you do) then something that crossed my mind is that in my personal opinion I love over-powered main character type stories which this story seems to follow, sorry so my opinion was that the direction you already had the story going was awesome though my problem was that I was hoping that this story doesn't follow the path of him constantly getting powers and abilities that doesn't suit the MC's path(or style i guess it could be called). Umm so what ig I'm trying to say is that I hope the story doesn't focus on him getting awesome powers that have nothing to do with him being a Sky Dragon God but also that the mc doesn't become so overpowered that he's basically one-hit killing all his enemies.