Item: A Daughter of an Ex-mafia
Rating: 4.4
Author: hansora

hansoraLv142yr

2022-07-17 17:07

Because so far it only has three chapters (at the time I read this), the plot is still unclear. I hope the author could develop more and answer the questions that might arise in readers. Writing-wise, I see rooms for improvement. With more practice, you're good to go. Learn by reading other books as well to help you construct better words and nuances, how to describe certain things. Best of luck dear author ✨ Don't ever give up!

A Daughter of an Ex-mafia

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Tharish99Author

Thank you for your honest review and advices 😍 Still a newbie and have much more things to learn..😋 and the complete plot isn’t unleashed and come out yet and hope you will be with my work till the end.

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