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2022-07-17 00:27

The capture of racist bullying in the opening passages was really done well. The self-talking and the acceptance of getting bullied were eerily relatable to me😅. But there are quite a few problems. Hope you don't get me wrong. I kindly wish you to correct some grammatical issues in your writing. And keeping multiple dialogues of multiple characters together in a single passage could impact the reader (saw it on a review for another work ages ago) Otherwise, it's a good story and has some strong characters with great potential. All the best🤞

A Daughter of an Ex-mafia

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Thank you dr 😍😍 for the honest review .. hope you will be with my book till the end

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