webnovel
driveknight
driveknightLv42yr
2022-12-25 06:19

Great start. Patiently for more chapters. I hope it doesn't get dropped.

Liked by 2 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
Unchainedx
UnchainedxLv5

It's always difficult to do a review of a novel with so few chapters, there's no way to know if the author will develop some cognitive problems and screw everything up in the next chapter (which happened many times), but some novels are so well done, interesting and with so much potential that it's hard not to get excited and review it, this novel is one of those cases. The DC universe is one of my favorite themes for fanfics and the MC is a fking Saiyan, that alone got me interested ngl, but the fact that the crossover element isn't as aggressive as we see in many other novels makes it even more fun to read, it's all done naturally and smoothly. The MC's personality is very well done especially when compared to other works I've read, come on, we've all read some novels where the characters' personalities don't match the life experiences they've faced, I've read novels where the MC have MILLIONS of years and acts like an ordinary child... Here we have a character with his traumas and who acts accordingly, it's pretty much like the journey of a man who has known only conflict and death since birth, an outsider no matter where he goes, I can't wait for his future development. The way the author uses the flashbacks is (in my opinion) amazing, it's an excellent way to approach the MC's past without just dumping a bunch of information in the first chapter or just ignoring it as many do... The scene transitions and the flashbacks are so well done and so smooth that sometimes I wish they were bigger, but in the end, they are perfect as they are. His relationships with other characters haven't been covered much yet (5 chapters only), what I can say from the little I've read is that it's very well done too, the author is faithful to the past and the Saiyan heritage of the MC and that's the same to other characters of the DC universe (only 5 chapters guys, don't know the future lol). Yes, I didn't say anything bad about this fic, yes, I'm in love after only 5 chapters, yes, the chance that the level drops or the author just goes into some store to buy some milk and leaves us (me!!) is pretty big (please no!!), but as I said at the beginning of my review: there are few chapters to go deeper into the story, all I can say is: Give it a chance, you won't regret it. PS: If you drop this novel my friend has some words for you:

Yuna_sama
Yuna_samaLv5
Related Stories

Sign-In System: One Piece, Demon Slayer & Beyond

Ron finds himself reborn in the world of One Piece, stranded on a remote island in the East Blue. But he's not just any ordinary child—he’s bonded to a mysterious sign-in system that grants him powers with every new location he visits. At his first sign-in, he unlocks the legendary Sun Breathing Technique, along with a boost to his vitality. From Shitmotsuki Village to Skypiea, Enies Lobby to Marineford, Ron travels the world, collecting extraordinary rewards that make him a force to be reckoned with. The Raikiri, one of the 21 Great Grade Swords, Armament Haki, Observation Haki, and more fall into his hands. As Ron steps onto the battlefield of Marineford during the legendary Summit War, the mightiest warriors—Four Emperors and Marine Admirals alike—pause, stunned by his presence. But Ron merely waves them off, "Don’t mind me. I’m just passing through." Join Ron on his journey across the Grand Line as he signs in at iconic locations, growing stronger with every step. This is not just an adventure—it’s a legend in the making. -------------- This is a multiverse fanfiction starting in One Piece, transitioning into Demon Slayer, then to One Punch Man, and more. If you’re only here for One Piece, feel free to stop when that arc concludes. If you love crossovers, you can continue reading :) -------------- Access 40+ chapters in advance on my Patreon: pat reon.com /ElvenKing20.

ElvenKing20 · Anime & Comics
4.8
207 Chs