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The grammar is rather poor, also the sentences are awkward and don't flow well which makes it a difficult read. I have too at times, pause to piece together what the author is conveying. Poor grammar and lack of brevity bogs down a novel with actual potential.
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It’s an honest critique of your work. They aren’t “wrong” for pointing it out. If you’re struggling with English and structure of your sentences. Use Grammarly or ask a friend who knows English better to help edit it.
Ares_One_Piece:Thanks for the response. And I think I've written in the story synopsis column that this story has bad English. You yourself are in the wrong because why don't you read the synopsis first and jump right into the story?
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Ares_One_Piece:Thanks for the response. And I think I've written in the story synopsis column that this story has bad English. You yourself are in the wrong because why don't you read the synopsis first and jump right into the story?
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Young_fruit_Smiley:The most childish reply I have seen..... !!!😂🤣 well done 👍
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