Review Detail of Whatchat in Devour Heaven
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It's good and I gave you two stars in the background of the world because so far I didn't know his background very well. Now I'm looking forward but excited to know about your background and strength levels. Come on, keep working hard. Cheers.
Devour Heaven
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I REALLY APPRECIATE YOUR HONEST FEEDBACK! HONESTLY, I SAW ALL THE CHAPTER COMMENTS YOU LEFT AND I REALLY APPRECIATE THOSE AND IT ENCOURAGES ME TO CONTINUE AND IMPROVE AND BECOME A BETTER WRITER! FOR THE WORLD-BUILDING I WANT THE STORYTELLING TO FEEL NATURAL INSTEAD OF HAVING EXPOSITION DUMPS SO THAT IT WILL BE UNRAVELED IN DUE TIME. AS I CONTINUE WRITING MORE CHAPTERS AND THE WORLD IS REVEALED I HOPE IT'LL BECOME A STORY YOU'RE ABLE TO VIEW AS A 5-STAR-WORTHY STORY! I REALLY APPRECIATE YOU TAKING THE TIME TO READ THOUGH, SO THANK YOU!