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Alpha_Idiot
Alpha_IdiotLv41yrAlpha_Idiot

In my opinion, this story has potential. But the chapters are too short. Either author-san brings more chapters per upload or he should enlarge them. In 11 chapters the author didn't even finish the intro, for which many other fics need 3-4 chapters at most. Otherwise I find the idea with the personal weapon very inovative and the exclusion of the better growth skill stupid.

One Piece: Adventure of Leo

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Hit30
Hit30AuthorHit30

don't worry chapters will be longer in future 😊

Alpha_Idiot
Alpha_IdiotLv4Alpha_Idiot

thanks. It better will :)

Hit30:don't worry chapters will be longer in future 😊
BeastMaster64
BeastMaster64Lv1BeastMaster64

btw is this fanfic a harem ( it better not be)

Hit30:don't worry chapters will be longer in future 😊
Hit30
Hit30AuthorHit30

it is not a haram

BeastMaster64:btw is this fanfic a harem ( it better not be)