3/5 (Dropped at Ch 35) Obvious issues with grammar but author mentioned that and made a clear effort so it's fine, great start and potential based on Devil Fruit selection and future possibilities due to that. To much reliance on system for the story, lots of info dumping on system functions and grants to many boons. Systems are great for fics but putting everything on a silver platter can affect the story progression and the growth of your character, same as having to many functions ex. the crew cards. Lastly, and reason for dropping, presence of other reincarnator (Rindou food wars) as well as Multiverse items (Pokeball), the Black Pearl worked due to its functionality in the world environment but anything else is abit to much. Overall it is a decent fic, if you have no issues with what I mentioned I recommend you give it a try.
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