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Shadow_Magus
Shadow_MagusLv42yr
2022-07-11 22:38

Everything is rather well done, including story progression and world-building, as well as the characters. Especially the characters, rather will done. Only reason it is not full 5 stars is because of a few random changes in tense. Maybe it is because the english level is just too high for me to understand the random changes from past tense to present tense in the narration, but it just made me feel disconnected with the novel. Other than that, it is rather well made

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