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Czzi
CzziLv31yr
2022-12-28 12:11

Pretty solid start! I’m getting SIASSW vibes from this and I don’t dislike it. Normally in these types of animal system books you get things such as ’Epic of a Ice dragon’ and things of the such that progress a bit too fast. I do like this setting as well, but I feel you are advancing a bit too fast for comfort. I also didn’t really understand why the queen gave such an important mission to a mere worker that was clearly irresponsible (as he was late to the gathering) to a SINGLE ant? Especially considering her character, I wouldn’t think she would think such a ’peasant’ would be able to do it. It’s overall solid, and one little nitpick i have for you is I think “Eyes of Truth” should be something like “Eyes of Perception” or Abnormal Perception, as viewing weak spots seems something more to do with how you view things and not the truth of things.

Ant Society

An_Average_Author
4.8
4 Chs

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An_Average_Author
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I like my novel. What can I say? I know this premise might seem cliché, but give me and my novel a chance. I'll definitely prove you wrong! If you like the chapters, make sure to add Ant Society to your Library and write a review so I know what to work on! Chapters will be anywhere from 2,000-5,000 words.

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Amera_Mee
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Aiyssh, author where is the update, you literally forced me to write a review by not updating.

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NanotechPikachu
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Hi this novel is extremely good. I am enjoying this very much . I hope that author continues to write this novel. I am waiting for new chapters.. thnx

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FunniestGuy
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I rated 4.6, very good plot, from what I've read the concept is very interesting, I don't like the type of Mc in this story but it doesn't take anything away from it, I highly recommend reading this book. KEEP WRITING, MY BESTO FRIENDO!

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AIRA_
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I think the main character is interesting, but I can't help but feel he is adapting too quickly to the wild scenario especially for how he was introduced and portrayed in chapter one. The way the scenes are meticulously described is amazing and makes me like I'm there experiencing the story with him. I'll be sticking around to enjoy this unique angle of isekai, Keep it up!

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AceAmbrosia
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The plot is incredibly engaging, while the characters almost seem alive. The writing quality is descriptive but not overwhelming, and it makes you feel like a spectator inside the novel. One of the best novels I've read this week.

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MisterEnd0821
MisterEnd0821Lv2

I love how it started as a stressful job for the protagonist. The glaring coworkers, the tyrant boss, and a friend of his. It was getting good as he went on a truck crash hahahaha. It makes me want to look forward for more chapters. Hey author keep writing more chapters for me hahahah. Good job King!

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FarmerOfBrilliance
FarmerOfBrillianceLv2

This novel has potential if the author slows down more and puts thought into his scenes. Currently the novels feels like a speedrun which is very tiring to read.I hope u succeed in ur endevours.I gave u a five star rating because there is no use in putting down an author.Less than that will only negatively impact u.Anyway nice work hope u keep it up

1yr
VIRANDESIX
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ant capitalism slayyyyyyyy anyways the writing is very good, I enjoy the descriptions of the scenery a lot, easy to imagine Ash's surroundings. The clicheness of isekai is still strong here, but that doesnt mean overdone. If you want an isekai with an ant mc yolo

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