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SharonQuinnLv32yr
2022-08-16 07:17

This is beautiful! Though there were plenty writing errors in the first chapter but I like that the author knows what he/she writes or is writing. I liked chapter two the most. This is a nice start. Please keep writing. And also try to work on the errors like when to use past tense and all. Anyhow the book is a must read. Good luck 💯

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If I'm being honest, the prologue was rushed (might re do it later)

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