Great start so far. Decent writing and foundation for the story. Based on the author other stories, i bet this one will be as good or even better. My only wish is for more ubdates or possibly daily releases.

I know the author and I'm pretty sure this will be a good book as well like his other one...................................................

I have good expectations in your writing author so I'll give this a straight five as I'm a big fan of your Spidey ff, and I've been looking for a hotd ff as well, so good luck and keep up the good work!

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I used to read HOTD stories when I was younger so finding this one was a serious treat. The main character is likeable and romance between the characters (though early) is fluid. Looking forwards to reading more of this!

hey author, can you post this fanfic on scribble hub? with this new webnovel policy to force you to use the app i will have to stop reading here

all though there is only 4 chapter but I really like this story. ...................................................................................................

I like everything so far. Its good start and i love the humor and comedy scene in it. Never thought of such a thing can be OP really. This story got potential. I just really hope that you will not abandon the other story. Your writing style are dope. Wish the best for you n your stories.

I love your spiderman ff and I also love HOTD so I have high expectations for this. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

I like the story ......................................................................................................................................