4 chapters and I give up. There is too little worldbuilding and descriptions. I couldn’t get a clear image of who he was, where he was, how his ship was and what he did. A lot of ’he did this or that because of this or that’ but with a bloated word count to say very little. Furthermore, the title is misleading, making you think it’s about Starcraft, with the terrans, zergs and protoss. But it isn’t. And of course, there is the unnecessary cultivation...
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