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0Mashroom
0MashroomLv32yr
2022-07-15 14:45

After reading the three chapters I will say the writing at first is good and easily be read with no noticeable grammar errors; story wise is kinda fast pace action, but it's still 3 chaoters, I'll see in the future if change my mind, Character are decent. not that they are bad written characters is that they lack appearance wise. anyhow Goodluck author. [img=recommend]

TETHER

Shadow_Magus
4.8
23 Chs

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Shadow_Magus
Shadow_MagusAuthor

3 stars? T-T

2yr
0Mashroom
0MashroomLv3

for starts it might change my mind in the future [img=recommend]

Shadow_Magus:3 stars? T-T
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Kara_wish_writes
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the system part of the story is really interesting and the game too. although the update stability is bad and there are only two chapters right now. the book is amazing

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Booklovingwriter
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I am loving the story so far, and I hope the author never drops!

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babydragon25
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The story is well-written and the character designs have been lovely so far. I love the plot and the idea used to create this story. Been a sweet read till now.

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Maryzu
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Great writing. The description was top notch and I like how it was able to pull me in once I started reading. It got me hooked right from the beginning.

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NixOrtikal
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I feel tethered to this novel as the writer does a fascinating job of immersing the reader with gripping scenes and intense action right from the start. Our MC has it rough from the beginning and I want the best for him, keep up the good work, can't wait to see what's next [img=update]

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jungkooks_luna
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The writing quality was really great. The system, the world set by the author was beyond imaginable. A 5-star rating for this masterpiece. Looking forward for more

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f0011
f0011Lv10

Really well written book, i also love how you described the environments very well and the situation certain characters were in, i will have to say calling this book good is an understatement, i'm realy liking it.

2yr
Shadow_Magus
Shadow_MagusAuthor

Hi, it is me the author again I got a few complains regarding my update schedule. Let me inform readers before they dive in. It is indeed irregular. I put up a target for views at the end of each chapter, and only when said goal is achieved to I update the next chapter. Hope this wolves the doubts of some people. and thank you for reading.

2yr
Brian_Hanes_117
Brian_Hanes_117Lv1

The story is well-written overall, the updates are steady, the story develops well from what I can tell, the main character seems interesting, and this is a nice change in topic from many of the Webnovel stories. The one thing I would take away is that there isn't much description of what the characters look like in the story or the environment. That would further enhance immersion.

2yr
Rin_Nurnia
Rin_NurniaLv4

5 stars! Honestly, I read all the chapters and I can't help but got hooked with the plots. It's very interesting and this is my first time reading this kind of genre. I will absolutely add this in my collection, please keep up author!👍🏻✨

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