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jun_yun
jun_yunLv11yr
2023-09-06 09:33

This book was terrible and inappropriate, despite it only being 10 chapters. The writing was bad, the story was offensive, and the characters were poorly developed. I strongly advise against reading this book, as it contains content that is not suitable for all audiences. It's sad, cause I thought it would be better...

My Dear Duke(BL)

Sweet_Vanilla553
4.5
196 Chs

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Sweet_Vanilla553
Sweet_Vanilla553Author

I am sorry for offending you then. Thank you for the review.

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killua_13
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yayyy! a historical set up I'm really looking forward to reading this, dear author! thank you for this dream and please don't drop this

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Sisira_Warakagoda
Sisira_WarakagodaLv1

Cool! I love it. As expected from you. Gotta keep reading. I always wanted a historical one you know. So yes!!!!!!!!!😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

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Kkomi
KkomiLv11

This story has a unique world and unique plot.... it's mind-blowing. With the author's smooth writing, coupled with the intriguing storyline, it is definitely a good read for readers who are seeking for a unique novel that is different from all the others =)

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BL_freak378
BL_freak378Lv2

Already a new book? I am in!Omegaverse!We have got a duke!And a little sister too!I love it. Keep up the good work.Please update more though dude.

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Sweet_Vanilla553
Sweet_Vanilla553Author

Thank you for the review and appreciate your support.

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Sweet_Vanilla553
Sweet_Vanilla553Author

Thank you for the review.❤ I will post it here since I don't want to miss yours.

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Light_Breeze
Light_BreezeLv11

Nice plot. I love the indifferent ml trope who is going to be only genuine towards our other lead. The chemistry keeps you leaving wanting more

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Ventrif
VentrifLv11

I’m addicted :) I like your stories. Cant wait for more. :) now I’m going to binge read your other stories

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javalka
javalkaLv13

A proper review based on the first three chapters is early, so I might edit it later. Although it's difficult to say how well the world-building is done, there is at least some sort of magic, which is a plus for me. MC is still mystery, so hopefully his character development will be interesting. It's pretty easy to read the text. In my preference the synopsis is a bit too long and overly descriptive. Reading about plot twists is more interesting for me when I'm already invested in the characters. Good luck with your work.

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