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Nickman2933
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this is not a story it is just a series of events in like a bullet point manne its so fast no detail at all its always I did thes then I did this witch killed him then sold this then got this skill there is no story

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I can't use any common skills!

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Nickman2933
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the idea is solid it just needs description like instead of just say he went into a dungeon and cleared it go in to how he exactly used his skills where he stabbed the enemy what effect a skill has on the enemy body not just he had a 5 hour fight with the boss then won also show a description for every skill its ok if you do some of the fast past stuff but use it more like time skips when he is stronger

CetusWritings:I'm sorry if you thought of it like that, I'm already trying to slow it down but I can't just immediately slow it down but I am trying to make the changes a subtle as possible and maybe check out the next season when it's out, I promise it will be better!
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I'm sorry if you thought of it like that, I'm already trying to slow it down but I can't just immediately slow it down but I am trying to make the changes a subtle as possible and maybe check out the next season when it's out, I promise it will be better!