The idea is good , but the writing is somehow awkward. I know you are new into this but if you can refine it a little bit more it will be very intresting novel
Hello reader! Author-san here to tell you that I appreciate the honest review.If you want to read the book, then I recommend you to read it when it's 25 chapters and above.P.S. Don't worry, as I try to improve writing each chapters. I appreciate the review Have a great day ahead!