Been thinking I should update my review for a while, and in light of Author getting contracted, I thought now might be a good time. Too bad WN doesn't allow edits, so a new review it is.
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Writing Quality: 5/5.
Honestly, I have no complaints. Author is one of the few who actually cares to deliver good quality chapters that doesn't have tons of mistakes. You don't lose your brain cells reading the chapters.
On the contrary, there's rarely any mistakes and it's 'very readable', (as he claimed in his Synopsis A/N.)
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Story Development: 4.5/5 (~5/5)
The start of the story was very similar to TFC, but Author changed a lot of things and didn't just copy paste stuff from there to his novel. I appreciate that. This story feels original (not as much in the concept, but in the way the story progresses and characters and relations develop). It's nothing ground breaking as far as stories goes, but I've had a TON of fun reading it. I enjoy it.
For the genre of story this is, I was not expecting this good of a story.
Also, I like how things are progressing. The change from initial SOL style to more adventure and mystery is nice.
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Character Design: 4/5
MC: Again, as I said in my old review, MC isn't some crazy guy. He's your average 22 year old male with a hot blood. He initially comes off as a bit too hørñy, but the character development is noticeable. I have no complains there.
Side Characters: I actually like how Author gives the POVs of side characters and we get to see how they feel about things. About MC's change initially to his [SPOILER ALERT!!!!] sudden disappearance(let's just say).
His mother, sisters and even the maids seem to have a lively personality and aren't just mute background characters.
I like reading their POVs.
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Updating Stability: 5/5
You've been a bit slacking lately, Author. But I'll give you a break, since from the time I've started reading this novel(which was very early) your updates have been pretty frequent. I prefer daily updates, but it's okay if you can't make it for a day or two due to personal reasons. At least you don't stop for weeks or something.
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World Background: 4/5
We're still in the early phases and the world is still pretty much a mystery. But I have liked the little tid tids you've shown us so far. I'm really hyped for that Adventure Arc. Let's go and explore the world and the various babes around the world! XD
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BONUS:
Lemon: 5/5. My, that first lemon was a treat! After two ç0$ç-bløçks, it was starting to get annoying, but you didn't disappoint me on the third one. Well done, Author. I'll give you a 5/5 for that juicy lemon.
Enjoyment: 5/5. I do love reading this story. Even with its minor flaws and issues(that I can easily overlook), it's still somehow a really fun to read story for me.
I am real interested in what kind of world you'll build. This is why I'll be generous and give you a 5-star and not 4 point whatever that I should be giving you. This isn't an objective review. It's a subjective one.
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To author: You might be new to writing, but you're not bad at all. You're actually pretty decent as far as WN writers go. And I know you'll improve as you continue to write. So, keep it up. I'm supporting you wholeheartedly. (Until you decide it's okay to have NTR in the story. That's how you'll lose my support completely. BUT! Luckily, you said there will be no much thing here, so we're good. :) Keep up the good work, Author!)
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