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2022-07-14 11:10

Nice story so far. Need more. For now 5/5 stars. [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]

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why put spoiler warnings then

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Lord_KronosxX
Lord_KronosxXLv3

Everything about this novel is 10/10 and is deserving of any and all praise. This is not an exaggeration. The Arthur gives their heart into the chapters they create which gives each page the polishness that, let's be honest, even some contracted novels lack. Truly, I was bored of the repetitive nonsense that has been accumulating on webnovel recently. All rubbish. Nothing felt fresh, but this, this is fresh. From the easy to understand, pleasant writing to the characters feeling alive. Each side characters has a goal of their own. Rether that be the main character's elder sister wanting to be a top swordsman or the Head maid willing to belittle herself to upton for her mistakes. Did a give a mini spoiler. Oops. Anyway, they all have thoughts of their own and aren't blatantly following the mc nor mindlessly doing things for the convenience of plot. There's few errors and mistakes that won't enact the rage of bad grammar from within you I promise. Personally I enjoyed the journey so far, currently read chapter 50, and I urge you to give it a try for yourself. That is if you're ok with the tags, reread them just Incase. Don't want any nonsense now do we? To the Arthur: I enjoy your work, really, it's great. I know the motivation you've felt at the beginning has dwindled a significant amount, I don't blame ya, there's a lot of nonsense with webnovel user's who give one stars for idiotic reasons and even sometimes no reason at all. However and this may be selfish of me but I urge and encourage you to continue on. Even with your lost of motivation the recent chapters hasn't taken a slump in delivery nor quality. If you have to, take a tiny, tiny, break to recover that lost motivation but I must warn you that webnovel Arthur's have a curse of dropping novels once the Arthur takes a break. Wait this review feels too long, I've started rambling. Too make matters short I love your novel, please continue on with your hardwork. It does not go unnoticed. And if you can why not gain something from it like a Patreon or something. Just see where it goes. I do like reading for free tho, I mean who doesn't, but works like these deserve extra if you know what I mean.

Atlas_123
Atlas_123Lv4

TL;DR: 5/5 Story has great potential. And so far it's been great! ------------------------------------------------------------------ Okay, I may be biased since this novel came EXACTLY when I wanted a better version of "The conqueror's path" that I was reading at the time. I also must stay that it's not always nice comparing two things. But since the Author took, inspiration from the said novel and has given us A BETTER STORY with BETTER WRITING QUALITY, I'm just gonna go ahead and say this one is SO MUCH BETTER than that one. Now, on to the review~ Writing Quality: 5/5. I don't look for Shakespearean or other fancy English writers' level of English in a web novel. I want something readable and not too crazy. Something that doesn't read like a 3 year old's writing and has 15 mistakes in a 2 sentence long paragraph. And this is it. The writing is perfectly good for me. Barely any mistakes or typos, grammar is fine to me, and nothing unattractive in the writing style. At least for me. I'll be generous and give it a well-deserved 5 star in this section. Note: The conqueror's path lacked this a lot. That one had like 2/5 writing. :/ --- Story Development: 5/5. There's only been 20+ chapters with less than 50k words. The story is still in its youth stage. So, I can't say how it'll go on in the future, but till now I've had an enjoyable read. It's got humor, drama, some dark elements and a few other things. It's nothing ground breaking as far as plots and settings go, but I still really like the story. I definitely would want to read more of it. --- Character design: 4.5/5. 1. MC is decent. Nothing too crazy. He's your average 22 year old. But he doesn't come off as detestable or too pathetic. He's not a beta. But has yet to fully show his full Alpha side. He has his moments and sometimes he's okayish. But it doesn't ruin the story. I actually find it quite good for the story. 2. The side characters so far have been interesting. His mother, sisters and the head maid are the main side characters so far honestly, I like them all. They're all good and they do their part well. --- Update Stability: 5/5. Author posts 1 chapter/day. 1 or 2 chapters a day is never enough for a binge reader like me, but this is good enough for the author. It actually keeps me waiting for the new chapters and keeps the excitement going. Power of serialisation. I have no real complains here. --- World Background: 5/5. Honestly, there's not much of world building yet. The story, as I said, is still in its early phase. But from the synopsis and initial description of the world in the starting chapters, it seems quite interesting. I'm curious to see all kinds of races, places and things. --- Bonus: Lemon: This novel is supposed to have it, but there's none yet. Which is sad, but understandable. Author is focusing on initial world and character building and that's a good decision. I don't want premature seggs scenes with a living fleshbag with a name. I would like to know the characters. And with author's writing quality so far, I'm expecting something at least decent or good. Overall: I have rated it 5/5 for its potential and enjoyment. I'm so excited and interested to see where this story goes. With a good plot setting, like the novel it's inspired from, and with good writing quality, I can definitely see it gaining popularity. Keep it up, Author. I have high hopes for you. 👌🏻

Atlas_123
Atlas_123Lv4

Been thinking I should update my review for a while, and in light of Author getting contracted, I thought now might be a good time. Too bad WN doesn't allow edits, so a new review it is. ~~~ Writing Quality: 5/5. Honestly, I have no complaints. Author is one of the few who actually cares to deliver good quality chapters that doesn't have tons of mistakes. You don't lose your brain cells reading the chapters. On the contrary, there's rarely any mistakes and it's 'very readable', (as he claimed in his Synopsis A/N.) ~~~ Story Development: 4.5/5 (~5/5) The start of the story was very similar to TFC, but Author changed a lot of things and didn't just copy paste stuff from there to his novel. I appreciate that. This story feels original (not as much in the concept, but in the way the story progresses and characters and relations develop). It's nothing ground breaking as far as stories goes, but I've had a TON of fun reading it. I enjoy it. For the genre of story this is, I was not expecting this good of a story. Also, I like how things are progressing. The change from initial SOL style to more adventure and mystery is nice. ~~~ Character Design: 4/5 MC: Again, as I said in my old review, MC isn't some crazy guy. He's your average 22 year old male with a hot blood. He initially comes off as a bit too hørñy, but the character development is noticeable. I have no complains there. Side Characters: I actually like how Author gives the POVs of side characters and we get to see how they feel about things. About MC's change initially to his [SPOILER ALERT!!!!] sudden disappearance(let's just say). His mother, sisters and even the maids seem to have a lively personality and aren't just mute background characters. I like reading their POVs. ~~~ Updating Stability: 5/5 You've been a bit slacking lately, Author. But I'll give you a break, since from the time I've started reading this novel(which was very early) your updates have been pretty frequent. I prefer daily updates, but it's okay if you can't make it for a day or two due to personal reasons. At least you don't stop for weeks or something. ~~~ World Background: 4/5 We're still in the early phases and the world is still pretty much a mystery. But I have liked the little tid tids you've shown us so far. I'm really hyped for that Adventure Arc. Let's go and explore the world and the various babes around the world! XD ~~~ BONUS: Lemon: 5/5. My, that first lemon was a treat! After two ç0$ç-bløçks, it was starting to get annoying, but you didn't disappoint me on the third one. Well done, Author. I'll give you a 5/5 for that juicy lemon. Enjoyment: 5/5. I do love reading this story. Even with its minor flaws and issues(that I can easily overlook), it's still somehow a really fun to read story for me. I am real interested in what kind of world you'll build. This is why I'll be generous and give you a 5-star and not 4 point whatever that I should be giving you. This isn't an objective review. It's a subjective one. ~~~ To author: You might be new to writing, but you're not bad at all. You're actually pretty decent as far as WN writers go. And I know you'll improve as you continue to write. So, keep it up. I'm supporting you wholeheartedly. (Until you decide it's okay to have NTR in the story. That's how you'll lose my support completely. BUT! Luckily, you said there will be no much thing here, so we're good. :) Keep up the good work, Author!) ~End of Essay~

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