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SoManyAngels
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2022-11-18 19:30

Considering the updates... as far as I can see they're coming in consistently. But regarding the characters and the setting.. I feel like it's a copy of overlord. The magic, the mc, his attendants(the azaroth castle monsters) . It seems like the author was 'heavily' inspired from overlord. Azaroth is like Nazarick, his attendant Aurelle? I think her name was, is like Albedo and he himself resembles Ainz in some ways. Universe items, world items, magic tiers and stuff... so yea. Sorry if I offend you author, but this is my honest opinion... 😣

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Fallen_Tear
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137 Chs

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Fallen_Tear
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yup probably true so far. especially from the setting and also the attendant. Well I was initially quite surprised by the response from readers, "Don't they realize these works are very similar?" so I thought. I'm pretty glad you noticed, well this piece is mostly inspired by Overlord. But I want to take a different path in the plot to conquer the world. and it will be very far from overlord. I want to combine many elements, well I really like your opinion. Apart from Overlord, I also combined many references to make this story. Thanks for your opinion, I'm really glad someone noticed. Thanks! ~ Fallen Tear

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SoManyAngels
SoManyAngelsLv4

......... tbh, that was definitely not the reaction I expected, and yet, it makes me feel like wanting to give the novel another try. Hopefully you do make it different from Overlord, really looking forward to it now 😁

Fallen_Tear:yup probably true so far. especially from the setting and also the attendant. Well I was initially quite surprised by the response from readers, "Don't they realize these works are very similar?" so I thought. I'm pretty glad you noticed, well this piece is mostly inspired by Overlord. But I want to take a different path in the plot to conquer the world. and it will be very far from overlord. I want to combine many elements, well I really like your opinion. Apart from Overlord, I also combined many references to make this story. Thanks for your opinion, I'm really glad someone noticed. Thanks! ~ Fallen Tear
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KIING
KIINGLv14

And how is that a bad thing?

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Maedreas
MaedreasLv13

hello romance? 1 FL? harem?

Fallen_Tear:yup probably true so far. especially from the setting and also the attendant. Well I was initially quite surprised by the response from readers, "Don't they realize these works are very similar?" so I thought. I'm pretty glad you noticed, well this piece is mostly inspired by Overlord. But I want to take a different path in the plot to conquer the world. and it will be very far from overlord. I want to combine many elements, well I really like your opinion. Apart from Overlord, I also combined many references to make this story. Thanks for your opinion, I'm really glad someone noticed. Thanks! ~ Fallen Tear
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