Its good for a first time author. I just wanted to ask that how did he travel to so many dungeons in phase 1. Were there so many dungeons in his own city or did he fly from one place to other in span of just 3 months or is there a different world in the oblesiks where he goes shopping and hunting . plz clarify . Overall the your idea is great and a little romance with his aids will not hurt
Stupendous_Steph
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LIKEStupendous_Steph:I think it's pretty obvious that he used the combination of flying and the fact that a few dungeons are near each other to clear so many, and no shops are located in places with high human population, not in the obelisk.