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Spearow0
Spearow0Lv32yr
2022-09-13 10:28

This is a legit good fanfic, much better that's your average mha fanfic, its just a bit sad that the mc did not got actual quirks but the powers of Emma frost, the author could had tried to combine all those powers into a strong quirk, but it is as if a child Emma got transported to a different world with the mind of our mc. With the quirks having a "Mind" or an "Ego" peer say, it could had been much more interesting to talk about a true telepath interacting with the quirks, the difference of a mutation to a quirk is very big. Besides those details that i dislike, its been a very enjoyable fanfic so far.

My Hero Academia: The White Queen

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Falsic
FalsicLv15

Basically, the author has a story in their head and summarized it for everyone else. It feels like they have a place in MHA they really want the story to reach and are rushing to get there.

2yr

Tim_QQQ
Tim_QQQLv1

author tries too hard to make mc perfect at literally everything. but its all monologue. for example, in the quirk test (first day at UA) she dosent really try in any of the events but thinks to herself in self monologue about being about to beat everyone here and being the strongest. she literally cant stop jerking herself off while acting nonchalant about everything. also, the author used the same lame trope of the real white queen being in the mind of the mc and saying "so we finally meet" i almost threw up honestly

1yr
AlanPokhrel22
AlanPokhrel22Lv2

The MC was fine at first but now she is channeling a little too much of Emma Frost. I also like Marvel's Frost as a character but her tendency to see everything and everyone around her as tools, although works in a death world like Marvel, it feels really off in the relatively light-hearted world of MHA. The MC is doing that too much in the recent chapters.

2yr
JayFireblood
JayFirebloodLv15

Written at chapter 15. This story has good potential but is ruined by bad writing quality, rushed story and no real depth to characters. I would say give it a try but don't have high hopes.

2yr
Ema_Rivas
Ema_RivasLv1

Como lo encuentro en fanfiction? Podrías poner el enlace o el titulo al menos ......... ÁhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhÁhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhÁhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

2yr
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