Review Detail of Uraidi in From The Start, I Traded A Galactic Warship

my review based on 20 ch, i think the story is good, but maybe juat me but the translation is, i cant enjoy it, like the the "flow" of story dont translate very well. i read many storyb in webnovel, many had bad story, but i can enjoy it because translation "flow" is good. (i cant read chinese and my english just so so)