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2023-03-21 04:39

The story is overall good nothing bad so far(at chapter 23 when writing this)the only real problems I have is the Mc he feels to naive I don’t how to explain this but his mind set and way of doing thing reminds of generic isekai hero it’s not particularly bad but boring for me and btw why hasn’t he official try to learn how to fight use magic or mana control something and lastly he is pretty hypocritical with how he treats dragons has monster(I say this because when he first killed he pretty much justified it has they are inhuman)and then he want to befriend them for power honestly I feel he should go for the half dragon evolution and stop treating his humanity like it gold tbh I don’t ’ really understand his mind on this so people explain

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