Review Detail of KuroHyoudou in Naruto: I Read It In A Book [COMPLETED]

I read quite a few chapters so I think I'm eligible for giving a review. Overall the fanfic was good quality. At least before I dropped it since I have no clue how it's doing now. The few gripes I had with this story was the illogical decisions made by the characters which resulted in Naruto being in prison before he goes completely bonkers. My memory is not clear but I think he gets arrested for killing Itachi and Izumi through the ploys of Orochimaru but because the characters lack no common sense in the story, he goes to prison instead of a yamanaka confirming his story. Another gripe was the fact that this story tried too hard to be like the Joker.