Review Detail of Young_fruit_Smiley in Werewolf Diaries
Review detail
So there's no world background ... . Character design/development is good.. . writing quality/style is bad like horrible bad.... it's readable but you can't understand what's happening ...(like: my name as a person is ysmiley. After going to job I left the keys there & in the house I have some books left to read ) . story development is meh, nothing is explained why what happened or anything for that matter š¤.
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Young_fruit_SmileyLv14Young_fruit_Smiley
instead of reading different types of novels.... you should watch this on YouTube : 1- How to write a story 2- How to show not tell 3- How to seamlessly switch between characters 4- How to not skip impacts & important plot points . Good luck š
Though_that_then:Iām going to read different types of novels, to try and improve my writing
Though_that_thenAuthorThough_that_then
Young_fruit_Smiley:instead of reading different types of novels.... you should watch this on YouTube : 1- How to write a story 2- How to show not tell 3- How to seamlessly switch between characters 4- How to not skip impacts & important plot points . Good luck š
ThePandaCriticLv1ThePandaCritic
Young_fruit_Smiley:instead of reading different types of novels.... you should watch this on YouTube : 1- How to write a story 2- How to show not tell 3- How to seamlessly switch between characters 4- How to not skip impacts & important plot points . Good luck š