Review Detail of Chulian in

I really like the story and the suspense building up in the later chapters (Chaps 30ish). One thing I would recommend is to further describe the characters mental states and how they think while reacting to different situations (which is kinda unfair from me to write at this point. But I think a non perfect review will give other potential readers a better view on the story. I hope you continue like you have been till now!