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So for now the story is going in a good direction, the plot has potential in my opinion and I'm looking forward to the sequel but author [spoiler alert] do you plan to develop the character as someone helping others? in the last current chaps, he helped Luis and Laura well, although luckily he didn't give them the hidden quest. Afterwards even if I don't like it when people cling to the mc to survive and involve him in bad situations, in this story it increases the realism and the immersion which I find excellent. Finally, I highly recommend it and I look forward to the sequel. Thank you for your work author. -Sorry for my english (i am french) ^^