Review Detail of KhadaFourJhin in Conquering The Omni-Verse!

Apart from the occasional grammar mistakes and iffy dialogue. This story is actually really good. Maybe it's because this is the first 'The Boys' Fanfiction I've ever read but I'm really looking forward and excited for what happens in the future. Updates look pretty good, although I've only read 11 chapters, the story looks decently done also. What I like the most though is the main character design. He is a borderline psychopath that wants to rule the world, his way of thought is seemingly perfect for someone as messed up as him, and if done right might come off as a pretty generic but decent villain. An MC being evil just for the sake of being evil sounds good to me at least. World background is pretty good as well, if you've never watched the series or read the comics you might understand the story but probably not as enthusiastic as me. Overall from the 11 chapters I've read so far, this is a strong story I'm really looking forward to, but my only wish is for an editor to fix the errors that come every now and then.