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2022-09-09 02:01

For a start, wow, it's so wonderful to see a boy who loves to write, from my point of view, it's such a rare event for me to come across you. I encourage you. I love supporting people who have such amazing ambition. The novel is good, it reminded me of a period when I was obsessed with this genre. I loved the way the plot was and how the family relationship was in the beginning. It only needs to mention some details to support the background of the world more and bring the picture closer to the reader. With a little tweaking and correction in the future, you'll make a buzz and shine. The very rapid events also made me a little dumbfounded at first, perhaps because it's been a while since I've been reading a novel of this kind and I'm not used to it. With that, wow. It's like I'm watching a drama. fighting. [img = يوصي]

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