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LilKitty
LilKittyLv42yr
2022-07-05 04:43

Early review. Pacific Rim fanfics are rare and sometimes badly done, but this is an exception. While the writing is weird in some places, it is understandable. Story development is fast, but as Margaret Atwood said once in an interview: "If you want to start a book, start it with a run or a sprint, do not doubt yourself when writing." (I probably wrote it wrong, but the meaning is the same). Character design is simple and likable. Updates seem regular. World background, it's Pacific Rim.

Reborn In Pacific Rim as a Pilot.

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Thrust
ThrustLv3

All im gonna say is even though this is the authors first fic he is doing better than most experienced fic Authors. This is just one of those fics that you just cant wait for the next chapter well done Author!!!

2yr

ObamaUchiha
ObamaUchihaLv4

the romance is physically painfully cliche. basically, you guys know those authors that introduce their most beautiful crush they can think of into the story with the first few chapters and then proceed to make the girl fall for the mc through sheer handsomeness. its one of those fanfic. read at your own risk but its probably hot garbage.

2yr
LaughingArkBuilder
LaughingArkBuilderLv14

Awesome start, hopeful for this story. [img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp]

2yr
Marcus_whatever
Marcus_whateverLv2

Good so far and I'm excited for its potential you dont see many pacific rim fanfics out there..... ..................................................

2yr
TheRamenLord
TheRamenLordLv13

Its a Pacific Rim fanfic ofcourse i will give it 5 stars no question about that. Already read the 2 chapters which were uploaded. Writing quality is decent and perfectly understandable. So its already then 90% of the other fanfics on this site. The MC doesn't ask to OP wishes which i really liked, the author is keep the MC more in-universe with his wishes and powers. Really great start i hope the author quickly uploads more chapters.

2yr
Unlimited_bw_1729
Unlimited_bw_1729Lv12

My first time reading a Pacific rim fanfic.Loved it thoroughly.Please keep up the good work. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

2yr
Kenai12_
Kenai12_Lv14

Seems great so far only reason I’m not posting a 5 star is because I’m upset there aren’t more chapters give more pls. Better than all the other ones I’ve found so far as well.

2yr
Blitzo
BlitzoLv13

Bruh I was just thinking how cool it would be for there to be a pacific rim fic 🪀🪀🪀🪀🪀🪀🪀🪀🪀🪀🪀🪀🪀🏓🏓🏓🏓🏓🏓🏓🏓🪀🪀🪀🪀🪀🪀🪀🪀🪀🥍🥍🥍🥍🥍

2yr
DASeraphicus
DASeraphicusLv14

I'm glad you updated it . .

2yr
Wyatt_Fullmer
Wyatt_FullmerLv14

I teally like how it's starting off and I hope that you continue this to completion really looking forward to how this book continues .

2yr
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