Review Detail of funkiller_562 in 100 Days to live

Seven chapters down. Time to leave a review. Okay, firstly a lot of grammatical errors. I hope the author takes her/her time to edit more. The plot is nice, a fresh new storyline that's not to cliche. Mia's character seems oblivious but can be smart at times. I like Akira but sometimes her sentences should be more concrete so we know, he/ she has actually lived for over two hundred years. As for Sira,I like her. She's well built, please edit more. it'll make it easier for us to understand most scenes