It's a great FanFic, Anyways i think Starlight is the FL, Shame i hopes for Maeve. Can you please do both? Technically 2 doesn't count as an Harem, 3 aswell actually to anyone who say 3 is an Harem then your crazy and i don't want you near my family.

even though this novel is not for me, different opinion. but this novel is good overall and definitely deserve a 5 star rating. and guys rate the novel if you enjoy it it helps the author in getting a rating and also let him know what you like and about all your complaint. peace out

Writing this at the 10th chapter. Story so far is excellent no problems gramm aticaly, or any that I’ve really noticed. Chapters are short but it gets updated daily. Story is progressing at a somewhat moderate so slow pace, could be a turn off for some but it’s perfectly fine with me. Anyways I do recommend to read from what I’ve seen of the first 10 chapters. Hopefully the author continues this excellent story and continues to improve.

i've read a total of 4 the boys fan fics all of em are really good this one is no exception the writing quality is good *this review was made after the release of chapter 13 *

Writing Quality☆☆☆☆☆= 5 stars no fault yet, or something that destroys the immersion. Story Development☆☆☆☆= Don't really know much till yet since I'm 😕 writing this at the 13th chapter, but seeing as what has happened till now I'll give 4 stars but might change it later on, Character Design☆☆☆☆☆= Perhaps the greatest part of the story yet, I've never played warhammer, but I can still understand the character. so 5 stars Updating Stability ☆☆☆☆☆= Easy five stars, Author uploads once everyday and also has a concept of bonus chapters. World background☆☆☆☆= Authour is adapting the world to the MC quite well but he hasn't made any big changes yet, so 4 stars.

Good novel, Writing quality is good... Keep updating!

End all cliff-kuns Good story. Nice plot arrangements. How strong mc compared to that guy the is number one hero forgot his name while writing this review

I feel like I wasted time reading this. I've read better fanfics on Wattpad. I think I've said enough with that. dadadawdawdawdawdawdawdawdawd

As the author, I give this story a shameless 5 stars.

As the author, I give this story a shameless 5 stars.