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HuDaSLv12yr
2022-07-05 23:17

Since this is my first review, I'll be frank. First, your quality of writing needs to be improved, because in the dialogues you messed up a few of them. Second, worldbuilding. You need to specify where the empires or countries where they are located. Overall, your story has potential, so keep writing, and I'm also looking for more!聽

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Thank you for your advice. I'll keep that in mind.

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