This is great! You can tell that the author is native to English and is writing well for his first fiction. his use of the fallout universe seems to be up to par for the chapters I have read

Good start to a novel, hoping it continues as it’s going in a good direction sofar with its story and keeping it playing out in a believable manner with not being crazy or stupid with showing the mods right from the start. Can’t wait to see though what mods got braught into that universes lore :)

Was a decent story until he got mechu deru and some super natural ability to repair everything with in radius and created an army of robots in the early chapters. It sounds good but he just got it with no effort. Like it came to him on a silver platter. Everything he got was littlerally offered to him. He got nearly unlimited ammo and guns. And People in the vault Just Let him collect resources enough to create a tank. When He said he was going to leave, nobody refused because he just went 'I am special' and they accept it. I would've liked it if things were harder to get. This is a wasteland afterall. The characters have no depth in character. Female lead Just went 'I cant live without you' without any warning. I mean, I get it, they were together from childhood but we littleraly get no perspective of her falling in love or slowltiy showing affection. It Just felt like she was Just created for him. Not like the 'oh they are match made in heaven' kind. But more like 'You are created only to love him and nothing more'.

5 stars for being a fallout fanfic, looking forward to the chaos of the wasteland. We need more fallout fics here, like I'm pretty sure there are more bts fanfics than fallout here on webnovel, it's a travesty.

This is the first time I have left a review but this stor is really good their arnt meny if any other fallout stories and the pacing makes this feel like a lot’s happening even when the MC is checking their stats.

Good, but too OP at the start in my opinion, but as of right now in the way the plot has been written nerfing wouldn't be possible in a logical way without increasing readers frustration, so best hopes on the authors endeavor but for my tastes of a story if he were to heed my selfishness would be a complete rewrite and risk of losing attraction from readers, so it's understandable, tally ho!

It starts with the mc being born in the vault and stuff, he learns stuff and trains stuff, makes good decisions that I don't have a problem with, and stuff. Overall, it's good stuff.

I really liked the story the plot is very interesting, the protagonist's personality is amazing I really liked it, the heroine so far is very good I'm really enjoying the interaction between them

I loved it~! It has been a WHOLE MONTH~! WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER!?

wish there was more to read right now because I'm looking forward to it. good work on everything