Review Detail of Concubinebeauty in A villain's path to being a white lotus

So firstly, the writing quality is good and it's easy to understand the development of the story. Within 4 chapters, we can already see some adaption to the situation from the main character. However, there really is a lot of plot armour. Too many things happen by coincidence - l don't know whether this is good or bad but it's something to keep in mind. Apart from that, the world background is fairly simple but what makes the story stand out is the style of writing - it's very lighthearted and conversational. Really makes you feel like you're hearing a story instead of reading one. The character design is very good - it's very endearing to see a system story where the main character is not too overpowered from the start. I'm definitely going to keep reading this story to see how things go.