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2022-07-23 23:41

After reading 12 chapters I think it's time for a review. First let's start with the best aspect of the book, its story. Now, the reason all 100k of us clicked on this book was because of the trope displayed in its name. -The Story (4.9/5) We have seen countless system books on Webnovel and one about someone without a system seemed pretty new and refreshing, and it is, although I wish we explored it more it doesn't take much away from the story as it is still interesting and fun to read despite the training arc Taeyang and Yu-Hee and in. The characters are pretty good, if you ever thought Yu-Hee was one bit annoying you should check out the latest chapter which made Yu-Hee and Taeyang a couple to root for. Writing Quality (4/5) The fights are pretty well written although we've only got one major fight, the author does have some grammar mistakes in the early chapters that took away from the experience, but it seems that's been solved in the later chapters. Maybe he got an editor or something. Updates (4/5) SMA updates three times a week with an average wood count of 1.5-2k words Character Design (3/5) The character design is vague and leaves a lot for the readers to interrupt. The only characters with in-depth character design are the protagonist Taeyang and the love interest Yu-Hee. The rest of the characters have a brief description or little to none at all. World Background (5/5) I like the history of the world and how this fictional world was the offspring of real-life events for example. *SPOILERS* The nuclear bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki created systems and the world tried to hide that truth with a fairytale-like coverup. Overall I give the book a solid 4.2 out of 5 so far, I will be coming back whenever a chapter drops and I highly recommend this book.

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