Okay, this takes a straight 5/5, without thinking twice. Considering this is the author’s first work…GOOD JOBBB👏👏👏, you did amazing, the explanations are clear and the story progresses smoothly. The tale Mr.Blythe told Eva ended in quite a peculiar way in the first chap, and it was quite unexpected for a six year time skip to happen. Basically took me unguarded. Again 5/5 and good job!

Welcome to my first novel >.< If anyone has any questions related to the book, feel free to ask me here ^^ I'm up for all types of feedback, no matter what kind it is or how kind it is, so go for it! Subduing The Devil Overlord is predicted to reach at least 800 chapters so it's gonna be a long run, do check out the synopsis for links on how you can talk to me privately. Enjoy reading ❤

hi, dear author, it's a beautifully written and captive book......with a well-designed character and world background. I must say I love to read it more......keep it up seat.....

Well written work. The fairy tale touch at the beginning like beauty and the beast made it all the more intriguing. It’s a dark fantasy romance with with two very interesting lead characters to follow. Very much worth reading. Great job author.

Writing quality is great! I love how the first chapter began, introducing the characters and giving us little details about their personalities was a genius idea. I love the pace work and the story flows very well with your choice of words. What I noticed is your inability to describe with all five senses but that did not ruin your writing in anyway. It's like a standard fairytale with well thought of descriptions and engaging conversations. I also feel the conversations should be separated from the paragraphs not buried in them. It makes it a little hard to tell who's talking. But it's an awesome story, one I presume will have a blossoming fanbase in the future. Supposing it has about ≈300-700 chapters.

Nice work! Would recommend This is the second Good romance book i saw today

Interesting story! Feels just like a fairytale! Love the fantasy bit on the MC's design such as silver hair and stuff The writing is pretty detailed, it made me feel like I was watching a movie. Great job! Although it could use some alterations like different choices of words here and there to match the setting of the story but overall it's still great! Keep up the good work, fellow author! 💪💖

I feel like I'm reading the best version of a fairy tale. I was hooked from the first paragraph. I just want to keep reading and not stop. It is one of the best books I have read so far! Love your book very much,author

From the first few chapters that I read, I knew this book is going to be great! The style of writing and the smoothness of the reading flow is superb! The way the MC was introduced is enough to draw you in. Keep it up author !