Review Detail of SpicyChickenWriter in Howling Love

The writing quality is really good - everything is clearly written and l had no problem understanding the writing. The prologue was the best chapter in my opinion. The only thing l would say is that the way Kyle is written as a character doesn't make sense. His parents just died and he immediately started acting cheerful in a new place? There's just a bit of unrealism but that doesn't affect the story much. The other thing is that the prologue and the proceeding chapters don't really match. I was expecting to read more about the struggle that Kyle was going through having to accept a new family and also with trying to train himself and tracking Ultra but instead there's more school interactions. This isn't necessarily bad but it just makes the story a bit more disjointed and disrupts the flow. All in all, the story is well written and l'll definitely be adding this to my collection. Good job so far!