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Review Detail of JohnWickCat in I, Your Father, Carry a Big Stick

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dropped at chapter 124. the start of story is really amazing. the author setting up the plot and situations around the character amazingly well, and that setup make development of each of characters through their exploration of their personality, goal, interaction of each other and relationship with each other progress logical and relatable enough for me to immerse in the story and such experience make beginning of the story 5 star for me. but that experience of the amazing beginning slowly becoming worse and worse the longer story progress, one of the biggest reason because lack of great setup along with lack of great exploration that author did really well at the beginning that become less and less and less. and story progress, its become " hey there is some sudden development of the story without any setup or built up rally and I am not gonna show it to you, so deal with it". like tsunade first meeting with the mc, or mc background hidden development of his technique for example. and a lot of these sudden background development or any sudden development really, happen a lot more at a cost of another great potential development that a lot more interesting and a lot more make a sense that fit better for the plot or setup that author already did for the first place. overall it's good story but really disappointing one.

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