Review Detail of NevoNeko in I, Your Father, Carry a Big Stick

Overall it’s an ok novel to pass the time, my only issue with it is that it doesn’t have any stakes. Everything just somehow works out for the main character. Plot points just happen without any explanation. You show us the result but not any of the, I guess inner monologue. It doesn’t really go into detail on things. Like the timeskip, you show us that Ino and Sakura try to better them selves. But you do nothing about Sasukes perspective especially since Uchiha’s are more emotional than any other clan. Same for how Naruto, somehow got over Sakura. The juicy parts are just skipped over for plot progression. It reads less like a Naruto Fanfiction and more like a Naruto Cast in a AU world without the nitty gritty bits that made the universe so good. (Delete Boruto, and war arc).