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Oluoma_Oragba
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2022-11-13 02:12

This book is a little fast paced, but the writing style is excellent. No grammatical errors. I love the descriptions, it makes one able to visualize the characters and the environment. The plot is good, but there is room for improvement. I got captivated in the first chapter though. Well done author, you'd go far.

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