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zigginah
zigginahLv22yr
2022-08-24 18:00

Love the book. The writer's work is impeccable and would love to read more of his work. Though I have something to point out. One of my readers mentioned some time back that when the paragraphs are too long it's hard for someone to concentrate on the book they get distracted easily. Just from the synopsis, I saw that because I didn't see if there were paragraphs it was just one long chapter which might discourage lazy readers. Great work though keep up.

Six Ways To Sunday

Juujuu_Sky
4.6
181 Chs

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Juujuu_Sky
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Thanks a lot 😊

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[Reviewed on: 08-09-2022] [Reading status: 3 chapters] [Reviewer: Aysel Inara] -*-*-*-*- REMARKS: - Talking about the cover first, please add some cover. Without it the book seems like a dropped or deleted version. - Synopsis seems good, I still suggest to shuffle it. Move the later part of synopsis up and the scene [take from chapter which is placed in synopsis] move it down as second half of synopsis. - Now let's move to the title, I still don't understand what significance it holds. Mind changing it to less poetic and more direct title? Because this one won't catch attention at all, also it's too vague to give anything about the plot. - Let's directly slip to chapter 1, it was interesting, hyped, catchy and intriguing. Good work there. - I grew bored soon in the middle of chapter 2 until the slap scene came in. Good job in putting it as somewhat cliffhanger. - Chapter 3 was great in terms of unfolding more into the plotline and taking us to why the abduction occurred. - I personally loved how the information was split into chunks to make sure the reader would grasp everything and not forget or overlook it. - However, lastly please don't make the paragraphs more than 6 lines It just tire the eyes with the outlook.

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