a good read, also loli mc, that said, i always wondered why the rating in this site is so ridiculous compared to other sites, either rated too high or too low. now i know, its this stupid review system that require that you write an essay just to give a score, so its only those who hate or love the novel that vote and not 95% of people who wont bother rating due to it being too bothersome.

Very good story, I want to see how it develops in the future, I like the characters and the narration is fascinating. I will be waiting for the updates

The grammar is flawless with little to no error. Sentence and paragraph flow could be improved a bit, but that is a minor nitpick. The story is intriguing and draws one in. It has decent pace and won’t run one over with plot points nor get bogged down with descriptions of the second and fourth tree of a random mountain. Definitely worth trying at least ten chapters and thirty if one has the time. I hope the author will continue writing the story and I look forward to its completion.

Ok then. I found the book very different from the other novels and gave it a try, it's a really refreshing book and I really wanna see how the girl grows...

I love the character and the background of this world. I know this was tagged as romance but i live the way author writes their battle scenes. The magic system in here is intricate and the characters are dynamic and engaging

I love the flow of the story; it feels like I am accompanying the main character through the story. I only read a few chapters, but I can see that the story is action-packed.

I find the plot of story very different than the typical ones. Author has taken a good start and I am really impressed by author's wide imagination. The main character depicts power and magic which is worth giving a shot to this book. I really like your work.

first time I've read up to me having to follow the story in a long time, I really enjoy this read. good job author, I had no times of boredom or cringe.

Enjoy reading this on a daily basis. The characters are very realistic and reasonable, with complex relationships. The world building and the rules are simple to understand, but has a lot of depth to it, which help new ideas seem logical and narural. From the occasional mistyped he/she pronouns it's a smooth read that gets you hooked. Really progressing well, cannot wait for further development. Keep up the great work.

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