Review Detail of Winter_E_Woodes in The Tale Of The Worst One

This is a bit of a classic hero's journey set in the author's fantasy world, in short. Overall, an enjoyable read and good story beats; if you like a fast pace this is for you (at least if it keeps going the same way in future chapters). The writing style take a bit of getting used to with the long sentence form, and everything is very spelled out for the reader, probably making for a casual read above all else. There are mistakes in grammar and typesetting, but in just four chapters the writing seems to have improved quite a bit, making me hopeful for future chapters.