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YetanoLv12yr
2022-06-23 09:33

Solid Stuff. Didn't expect this level of storytelling in a site full of monotonous Harem-OP MC- Cultivation-Getting Stronger. I, almost had nothing to add aside from the lack of the MC (Alder)'s inner thought to be revealed to us, You can add some minor details to the little things like the shoes he wears that may be a little rugged, the faces of the crowd looking at the spectacle, and views of the city before they arrived. This, I Will wait for this. This if done right, it got High Potential. Keep it up, G!

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