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XxErnestoxX
XxErnestoxXLv152yr
2022-10-11 18:12

this one is very very Bad and No Point in me telling you why exatly because Author will delete the comment Like the Others that pointed it out.

Supreme Master In The Apocalypse

Wateristubeg
4.1
183 Chs

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paulspy_fn
paulspy_fnLv13

ik you said he will delete but can you explain why? I want to point out a few reasons why. First the mc doesn't think at all. Second the pacing is way to slow. And third I am tired of the mc making the dumbest decisions he hates someone so much he wants to kill them but whenever he gets the chances he doesn't do so. Like he has the power to stop time and super strength he could really just stop time and punch through his heart to kill him but no he wants to expose him first lien dumb. He really could kill him first then easily expose him but whatever. And I read up to chapter 65 so you could say I did try the book

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XxErnestoxX
XxErnestoxXLv15

well because when i First found this book Others wrote how dumb and childish he is with his Powers and how the whole prologue is Garbage because his family that suffered is in a different world(i think he said parallel world) so he isnt even rescuing the ones that suffered. His Revenge is Pointless Like this.

paulspy_fn:ik you said he will delete but can you explain why? I want to point out a few reasons why. First the mc doesn't think at all. Second the pacing is way to slow. And third I am tired of the mc making the dumbest decisions he hates someone so much he wants to kill them but whenever he gets the chances he doesn't do so. Like he has the power to stop time and super strength he could really just stop time and punch through his heart to kill him but no he wants to expose him first lien dumb. He really could kill him first then easily expose him but whatever. And I read up to chapter 65 so you could say I did try the book
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XxErnestoxX
XxErnestoxXLv15

and those comments are deleted without a good reason.

XxErnestoxX:well because when i First found this book Others wrote how dumb and childish he is with his Powers and how the whole prologue is Garbage because his family that suffered is in a different world(i think he said parallel world) so he isnt even rescuing the ones that suffered. His Revenge is Pointless Like this.
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paulspy_fn
paulspy_fnLv13

I see

XxErnestoxX:and those comments are deleted without a good reason.
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paulspy_fn
paulspy_fnLv13

and yea it does look point less tbh

XxErnestoxX:well because when i First found this book Others wrote how dumb and childish he is with his Powers and how the whole prologue is Garbage because his family that suffered is in a different world(i think he said parallel world) so he isnt even rescuing the ones that suffered. His Revenge is Pointless Like this.
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Wateristubeg
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Hello, Author here. I do now know why I am here. I must be possessed. However, If you have any questions, you can ask them below and I will try my best to answer them (without any spoilers).

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NoWoRRyMaN
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I am the EXP of my sword... EXP is my blood... and EXP is my body... I have created over 1000 useless reviews... Unknown to death, nor know to live... I have withstood the pain of creating many more useless reviews... Yet, those hands will never write anything useful... And so I pray... UNLIMITED EXP WORKS

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HolyPepe
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How fast can you guess these words? 1. BOO_S 2. _ _NDOM 3.F_ _ K 4. P_N_S 5. PU_S_ 6.S_X Answers: 1. BOOKS 2. RANDOM 3. FORK 4. PANTS 5. PULSE 6. SIX You got it all wrong didn't you? You dirty minded person! NOW GO AND READ THE STORY TO CLEANSE YOUR SOUL!!!

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MrFalan
MrFalanLv14

I dont get it he dies goes back to past but in another similar world and just dousn't even remember, care, or question the well being of his original parents and keeps thinking about on revenge against people who killed him but those people are not them this is not the same world

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George_Vasiliu
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NewManagement
NewManagementLv5

Good story but mc is a complete idiot. Dies, goes back in time with knowledge to prevent a horrible future. Does very little to stop it. Has amazing powers but uses them like a tool. Has soooo many chances to fix the future but like an idiot, only does the bare minimum to save his own family. But does a horrible job at it

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Twinkle_Stars
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I have been reading this for days already (Currently at chapter 57). It's pretty good considering the fact that this is a harem novel. Well, we all know that some harem novels focus on 'the' scenes without considering the plot. Here are just the first few things that I wanted to point out. 1. The MC may seem dense, but it's given since in his past life he was just focused on his studies without caring about the world. I just hope that he will be smart enough to fight Julius in the future. 2. The MC's power still has limitations so don't expect a very OP MC in the early chapters or else you'll get disappointed. 3. The Apocalypse that is mentioned in the story is still far since our MC went back 3 months before it. I can say that the grammar of the story is good. It was just in the early chapters where there are minimal typos and mixed pronouns. The MC is great and the girls too (I really love Abigail and Lilianne). His powers are interesting, although there were still left that are not revealed.

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Poppy_Taylor
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Reveal spoiler

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shyfix291
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