Review Detail of Lord_lucky in Rebirth In The Cultivation World

It has been a while since i wrote something and i hope i'll get some feedback to improve my writing. This story is something i wrote after reading a pretty large number of xianxia novel, i always hated the way those mcs go around collecting females like Pokemon and swinging their swords like retards at the first person who opens their mouth, creating a bigger problem and an enmity with a clan/sect, then repeats the same thing after 20 chapters. So yeah i'll be avoiding that.