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I have read the first twenty chapters and I would like to say, reading them brought loads of childhood memories. It was an enjoyable read throughout. Personally, in my opinion, the author is capable of making me become quite frustrated with the FL but in a good way. Her attitude will make sense as you keep on reading. I'm not sure if John is the ML but I am rooting for him as well along with the rest of the characters. Story-wise, it's fast-paced for me because there's more telling than showing. I'm sure once the author gets the hang of writing and editing them so there would be equal telling/showing, it will definitely be a nice book for teens as it already is. Well done, author 💞💞